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I kinda like it and kinda don't like it.xD Please give me a critique but please don't mention anatomy or lighting ; u ; Okay bye!>_>
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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You did a very good job with this picture, the clothes wrinkles are very accurate and the posture and anatomy is great. I have to give you credit on the hands! Keep working on each same pad on the fingers and maybe make them a bit bigger.
The placement and most things are fine, I suggest you to work on the hips; around where the shirt ends it starts to look a bit buldgy. Also the creases on the left shoulder seems unnecessary.
The shading in someplaces seem to be different colors, I get that in some places are darker than others but I'm having a hard time identifying the light sorce.
The neck and the face have smooth lineart (Great!) But the hair on the right side looks too thick and not long and stringy like real hair. Also the top of the head looks a flat, hair should be like string and free.
But you did a VERY good job~ You have no idea how great I love this picture! Keep up with the good work!
I don't think the crease on the left shoulder is unnecessary because there are a lot of creases on your shirt and it would look matte without it.
I have a hard time with hair >_> I wish I would've noticed the unstringy hair more xD
I really love the outfit design too the colors go very well together.
Maybe you should work on the hands a little hands are very hard to draw... but you draw hands better than I do ;w;
Happy (belated) Valentines Day