FINALLY!!! YOU MADE A PICTURE WITH A TABLET, CRITIQUE TIME~
You did a very good job with this picture, the clothes wrinkles are very accurate and the posture and anatomy is great. I have to give you credit on the hands! Keep working on each same pad on the fingers and maybe make them a bit bigger.
The placement and most things are fine, I suggest you to work on the hips; around where the shirt ends it starts to look a bit buldgy. Also the creases on the left shoulder seems unnecessary.
The shading in someplaces seem to be different colors, I get that in some places are darker than others but I'm having a hard time identifying the light sorce.
The neck and the face have smooth lineart (Great!) But the hair on the right side looks too thick and not long and stringy like real hair. Also the top of the head looks a flat, hair should be like string and free.
But you did a VERY good job~ You have no idea how great I love this picture! Keep up with the good work! And have a lovely Valentines day!
You`re anatomy is very good! I love really love her expression it`s very cute~! I really love the outfit design too the colors go very well together. Maybe you should work on the hands a little hands are very hard to draw... but you draw hands better than I do ;w;