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Valentines Day by Coffee828 Valentines Day by Coffee828
This took way longer than it should.:iconwthplz: I kinda like it and kinda don't like it.xD Please give me a critique but please don't mention anatomy or lighting ; u ; Okay bye!>_>
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Aekamii Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
FINALLY!!! YOU MADE A PICTURE WITH A TABLET, CRITIQUE TIME~

You did a very good job with this picture, the clothes wrinkles are very accurate and the posture and anatomy is great. I have to give you credit on the hands! Keep working on each same pad on the fingers and maybe make them a bit bigger.

The placement and most things are fine, I suggest you to work on the hips; around where the shirt ends it starts to look a bit buldgy. Also the creases on the left shoulder seems unnecessary.

The shading in someplaces seem to be different colors, I get that in some places are darker than others but I'm having a hard time identifying the light sorce.

The neck and the face have smooth lineart (Great!) But the hair on the right side looks too thick and not long and stringy like real hair. Also the top of the head looks a flat, hair should be like string and free.

But you did a VERY good job~ You have no idea how great I love this picture! Keep up with the good work! :dummy: And have a lovely Valentines day!
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Coffee828 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much, this was really helpful! ' u '


I don't think the crease on the left shoulder is unnecessary because there are a lot of creases on your shirt and it would look matte without it.

I have a hard time with hair >_> I wish I would've noticed the unstringy hair more xD

:iconbrohugplz: But again thank you because of this comment, I will kick my own ass in the next picture I'll make!
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Aekamii Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome ^.^ But the wrinkles are overlapping .A.
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Radioactive-Ram Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
You`re anatomy is very good! I love really love her expression it`s very cute~!
I really love the outfit design too the colors go very well together.
Maybe you should work on the hands a little hands are very hard to draw... but you draw hands better than I do ;w;
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Coffee828 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!' u ' Yeah the hands turned out not-so-good (mostly 'cause of the no-joint look). No I think you're good! Just look at your hand when you draw >:3 :iconbrohugplz:
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Radioactive-Ram Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
You`re welcome! :meow: Well it`s hard to draw hands! and joints too ;w;
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Lu-WeeGee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
Daaaawwwwwww....love the derpy heart:meow:

Happy (belated) Valentines Day:D:hug:
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Coffee828 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!^u^ I know it's late but I hope yours was awesome too. :meow:
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Lu-WeeGee Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
You are welcome, and thanks:D
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Coffee828 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome o w o
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